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内容摘要:第一段,优秀范例In the lecture, the professor casts doubt on the reading passage that deep-sea mining is hopeful.对比平庸范例:In the lecture, the professo...

第一段,优秀范例In the lecture, the professor casts doubt on the reading passage that deep-sea mining is hopeful.对比平庸范例:In the lecture, the professor stands on the other side of the reading that digging the mine in the deep sea is hopeful.好吧,无老师错了,平庸范例写的稍微比优秀范例好了一点点,主要是因为stands on the other side of the reading写的惟妙惟肖。

第二句,优秀范例First of all, according to the lecture, although there are rich scarcely metals near volcanic vent of seabed, immediate technology for deep-sea mining is undeveloped and the metals from the mining are not always available.对比平庸范例First of all, according to the lecture, although there are many rare metals near the volcanic vent of sea floor, the technology of the deep sea mining is not good enough for dig these metal.显然优秀范例的rich比平庸范例的many更形象一点。然后优秀范例的near volcanic vent of seabed,对比平庸范例的sea floor显然优秀范例单词量很大。然后优秀范例竟然用到了immediate technology和undeveloped来分别表示最新的技术和不够发达,这比起平庸范例单纯用了technology和is not good enough显然用词地道很多!有其实优秀范例最后还用了are not always available这个用法来表示我们平时常用的can not这层含义,显得十分高端!

第三句,优秀范例For example, it is hard to separate metals from the sediment in terms of collecting technology.对比平庸范例For example, it is hard for us to separate these rare metals from the sediments that we excavate in the deep sea.这里优秀范例的亮点就是在于,平庸范例很麻烦的用了一个从句才写清楚的that we excavate in the deep sea,优秀范例用了一个轻巧的固定搭配in terms of collecting technology就写清楚了,而且还用collecting technology来表示已经写了很多次的mine这层意思,显得词汇量很棒!

最后一句,优秀范例Moreover, transferring the metals out of the sea is not easy with respect to transportation.对比平庸范例What’s more, considering the trouble in the transportation, it is not easy for us to transfer these rare metals.最后这一句呢,其实使优秀范例和平庸范例各有千秋。优秀范例是out of和with respect to这两个固定搭配用的很好!平庸范例是considering+宾语这个结构用的不错,当然,总的来说,还是优秀范例更胜一筹!美国gre代考|雅思代考|美国gmat代考|悉尼代考|美国雅思代考


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